I'm so not certain about the middle two panels here. I don't think they 'read' well with the strip. This strip is teaching me to SIMPLIFY for coherence... I only have four tiny panels to tell a story in. I have to use them more efficiently!
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Toth *Guest*
Guest post by "Toth" I had to read the middle two panels a couple of times to get it. I finally realized they were just background props. Heh. You've come a long way artistically.
Submitted November 29, 2014 at 9:17PM
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